Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree.

It has become common that

kids

behave

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to behave

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obedient,

disciplined

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and disciplined

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and vice versa in some situations. The responsibility

of

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for

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children

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children's

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behaviour is

the

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in the

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hands of

parents

and some people debate that the younger ones are responsible for their own actions.

This

essay will demonstrate my personal opinion that

parents

are

in-charge

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in charge

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of their

children

’s behaviour. To commence with, there are several arguments in favour of my stance.

First

and foremost,

kids

spent most of

time

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their time

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with their

parents

and they do observe

lot

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a lot

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of things.

However

, knowingly or unknowingly they follow their mother and

father

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father's

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words or actions to make it

as

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apply

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a habit.

For example

, if

parents

abuse,

argue

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or argue

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in front of their

kids

they will think abusing is

right

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the right

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thing and do the same. Overall,

kids

follow their

parents

and admire them.

On the other hand

,

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the parent

a parent

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parent

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parents

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should be role

model

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models

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for their own

children

, teaching them good manners,

how

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and how

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to groom when they are in public.

Furthermore

, the

parents

should

also

be punishable along with the

children

.

For instance

, in Finland they have a law if

the

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apply

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children

breaks

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break

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the traffic rule, the government will impose

fine

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a fine

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and punishment for both

parents

and

children

,

as a result

of

this

law

the

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apply

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road safety has been increased and accidents have been reduced. To summarise, all the points mentioned above point out that

parents

should

held

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hold

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the responsibility

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responsibility

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responsible

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of

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for

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their younger generation, we should

also

have

child

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a child

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parent law of Finland globally for a better and positive environment in the society.