Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree.

It has become common that
kids
behave
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obedient,
disciplined
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and disciplined
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and vice versa in some situations. The responsibility
of
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children
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children's
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behaviour is
the
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hands of
parents
and some people debate that the younger ones are responsible for their own actions.
This
essay will demonstrate my personal opinion that
parents
are
in-charge
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in charge
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of their
children
’s behaviour. To commence with, there are several arguments in favour of my stance.
First
and foremost,
kids
spent most of
time
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their time
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with their
parents
and they do observe
lot
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of things.
However
, knowingly or unknowingly they follow their mother and
father
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father's
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words or actions to make it
as
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apply
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a habit.
For example
, if
parents
abuse,
argue
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or argue
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in front of their
kids
they will think abusing is
right
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the right
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thing and do the same. Overall,
kids
follow their
parents
and admire them.
On the other hand
,
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the parent
a parent
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parent
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parents
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should be role
model
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models
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for their own
children
, teaching them good manners,
how
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and how
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to groom when they are in public.
Furthermore
, the
parents
should
also
be punishable along with the
children
.
For instance
, in Finland they have a law if
the
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children
breaks
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break
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the traffic rule, the government will impose
fine
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a fine
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and punishment for both
parents
and
children
,
as a result
of
this
law
the
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road safety has been increased and accidents have been reduced. To summarise, all the points mentioned above point out that
parents
should
held
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the responsibility
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responsibility
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responsible
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of
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for
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their younger generation, we should
also
have
child
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a child
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parent law of Finland globally for a better and positive environment in the society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upbringing
  • environment
  • instilling
  • moral values
  • discipline
  • influence
  • negate
  • individuality
  • act out
  • external factors
  • peer influence
  • broader societal issues
  • solely
  • community
  • social institutions
  • overly accountable
  • stress
  • unfair blame
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