Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree.
It has become common that
kids
behave
obedient, Fix the infinitive
to behave
disciplined
and vice versa in some situations. The responsibility Correct word choice
and disciplined
of
Change preposition
for
children
behaviour is Change noun form
children's
the
hands of Change preposition
in the
parents
and some people debate that the younger ones are responsible for their own actions. This
essay will demonstrate my personal opinion that parents
are in-charge
of their Correct your spelling
in charge
children
’s behaviour.
To commence with, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. First
and foremost, kids
spent most of time
with their Correct pronoun usage
their time
parents
and they do observe lot
of things. Change the article
a lot
However
, knowingly or unknowingly they follow their mother and father
words or actions to make it Change noun form
father's
as
a habit. Change preposition
apply
For example
, if parents
abuse, argue
in front of their Correct word choice
or argue
kids
they will think abusing is right
thing and do the same. Overall, Add an article
the right
kids
follow their parents
and admire them.
On the other hand
, Add an article
the parent
a parent
parent
should be role Fix the agreement mistake
parents
model
for their own Fix the agreement mistake
models
children
, teaching them good manners, how
to groom when they are in public. Correct word choice
and how
Furthermore
, the parents
should also
be punishable along with the children
. For instance
, in Finland they have a law if the
Correct article usage
apply
children
breaks
the traffic rule, the government will impose Change the verb form
break
fine
and punishment for both Correct article usage
a fine
parents
and children
, as a result
of this
law the
road safety has been increased and accidents have been reduced.
To summarise, all the points mentioned above point out that Correct article usage
apply
parents
should held
Change the verb form
hold
Add an article
the responsibility
responsibility
Replace the word
responsible
of
their younger generation, we should Change preposition
for
also
have child
parent law of Finland globally for a better and positive environment in the society.Correct article usage
a child
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