Nowadays, some sick people are using alternative medicine and treatment more than past, instead of visiting doctors. Some positive and negative effects maybe obtain as this issue but in my opinion negative affects are more.
Replacing
alternative
drugs and Use synonyms
treatment
Fix the agreement mistake
treatments
instead
of working Linking Words
professional
physicians is more Change preposition
with professional
interested
than past. Replace the word
interesting
First
, Those Linking Words
people
believe that using chemical Use synonyms
medicine
is dangerous for Use synonyms
human
body and when Add an article
the human
people
use them for curing their diseases, it could be harmful and make some kind of side Use synonyms
effects
. Use synonyms
For instance
, when Linking Words
people
use sleep pills after some months they would addict to them and could not live Use synonyms
without
. Correct pronoun usage
themwithout
Second
, the historical records of using Linking Words
alternative
Use synonyms
treatment
Fix the agreement mistake
treatments
is
back to many years ago so, many Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
from Use synonyms
past
were using them without any hesitation. Correct article usage
the past
As like
Change preposition
Like
as
Persian Change preposition
apply
people
that used herbal Use synonyms
medicine
in their countries Use synonyms
more
than 2000 years. Change preposition
for more
Hence
, there are logical thoughts about Linking Words
alternative
drugs and treatments.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
alternative
Use synonyms
medicine
could bring some Use synonyms
unfavorable
Change the spelling
unfavourable
effects
and professional doctors are worrying about Use synonyms
this
issue. As scientists do not accept Linking Words
this
kind of treatment because of Linking Words
lack
of research history. As Correct article usage
a lack
a
technology is been increasing, it Remove the article
apply
Use synonyms
effects
Correct your spelling
affects
on
medical science too. So, the side Change preposition
apply
effects
of drugs are less than past. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Moreover
they do Add a comma
,Moreover
many
research about all Replace the quantifier
much
kind
of diseases and problems and do not approve any curing system without significant documents. Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
As a result
, you can trust Linking Words
to
your doctor and use your Change preposition
apply
medicine
without any doubt.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
Linking Words
alternative
Use synonyms
medicine
and treatments have been increased Use synonyms
but
in my Remove the conjunction
apply
idea
it has more drawbacks Add a comma
,idea
instead
of benefits and Linking Words
people
should notice Use synonyms
about
that.Change preposition
apply
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