You have just read an article in an international travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir/Madam, In reference to the recent article published in your Tour and travel magazine on 22 September 2022, I would like to bring your kind attention to the misrepresented information regarding Chandigarh. You had mentioned in the story that Ambala is a part of Chandigarh which is not true because it had always been associated with Haryana. The publishing houses ought to provide valid facts as a plethora of readers read these books. If any of the followers believe what was written in the journal they would not buy the magazine again because of your unclear knowledge about the tourist places in India.
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the rest of the article was accurate,
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has become an unnecessary issue in my city. I would advise you to publish a similar article with the reference to the current one and
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mention the mistake that was made with an apology to the readers. Hoping for a positive response. Yours sincerely, Taran
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