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Some people believe academic success depends mostly on having a good teacher.others argue that is is the attitude of the student that matters most.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #success #teacher #attitude #student #matters
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good
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 tutor, some people think that it relies on student
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attribution
. In my opinion,
students
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experience
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 teacher is
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extremely vital for
students
, who
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 to obtain academic results.
In other words
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the teacher
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teacher
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 should be capable to explain different difficult topics to
students
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.
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transferring
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transferring
knowledges
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need
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 to be more fascinating.
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 tools, which assist to display information by
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 some information on a display.
However
, if
students
 do not have enough motivation to
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 it can be so effective. Another point to consider is that self-
studing
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studying
 is a key role to acquire academic success. Nowadays, we live in a developed digitalized world, where people have a lot of opportunities
such
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time
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Consequently
, they do not have more
time
 for learning new skills and technologies and rely only on a university
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studying
student
studing
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studies
.
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 a big part of
students
are
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 not able to achieve to desired results in universities. They should
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 on their
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studying
studing
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studying
 and excel
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time
 management, which is crucial. Overall, while a certain category of people believes that academic success is on a good tutor, I think that
students
 ought to pay attention
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 their self-
studing
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studying
study
 because getting and
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processing
a new information
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 need more
time
. Teacher with a
cabality
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capacity
capability
ability
 to explain tough themes through simple language
invvidual
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individual
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students
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 must spend more
time
 for self
studing
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studying
 not enough learn only at university
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