You have recently moved to a new flat. Unfortunately, you lost some money the other day, and cannot afford to pay next month's rent which is due. Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation that you will pay as soon as your parents send the money Also, mention that there are some pridem with the flat.

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Dear Mr Verma, I am your tenant and have recently moved into one of your flats in Friends Street, Delhi. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I will not be able to deposit the rent due for

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month by

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week as I lost some of my money while attending a college event yesterday. Since I am a student, I am totally dependent on my parents for my expenses.

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, I belong to a middle-class family and my parents have to raise my two siblings as well.

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I have explained to them about the incident, I believe that they will not be able to afford more money and send me any time soon.

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, it would be really difficult for me to pay the rent by the due date for

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month. But, I promise that as soon as they will transfer the funds, I will submit the rent due.

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, I wanted to bring your attention to some problems that I have been facing in the flat. There is a leakage in the washroom tap due to which it always remains wet.

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, the water pipe in the kitchen is clogged with dirt due to which water gets collected in the sink while washing the dishes. It would be great if you could call a plumber and get these fixed for me. I hope you will understand my situation and respond soon to my problems as well. Yours faithfully, Akash

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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