People rarely interact with their neighbours and this is a harmful effect for local communities. What are the possible cause and solutions.

Citizens rarely get along with
Add a hyphen
next-door
show examples
next door
Add a hyphen
next-door
show examples
neighbours
and
this
has
been
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
affected local communities. The main causes of
this
phenomenon are that most
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
people
have two jobs and lack
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
knowledge of the local
language
;
however
,
this
could
be solve
Change the verb form
be solved
show examples
by increasing the
Correct your spelling
minimum
minimun
Correct your spelling
minimum
wage and giving away free classes for learning a foreign
language
.
Correct your spelling
One
show examples
On
Correct your spelling
One
show examples
of the main causes that citizens do not get along with others is that they have no time to interact with others because most of them need to attend two jobs, so they really have
Correct your spelling
minimum
minimun
Correct your spelling
minimal
time to share.
Firstly
, having no time is one of the big causes that
people
do not interact with each other, so verbal communication is less frequent these days. Another cause is that many of the
people
living in California, foreigners, have no knowledge of the English
language
, so they tend to ignore other when
speak
Change the verb form
speaking
show examples
to them. More importantly, many of these
people
are
accustom
Change the form of the verb
accustomed
show examples
to not
interact
Wrong verb form
interacting
show examples
with their local
neighbours
to avoid feeling
Correct your spelling
embarrassed
embarrased
Correct your spelling
embarrassed
. For
Correct your spelling
instance
Intance
Correct your spelling
Instance
, In California,
Correct your spelling
forty
fourty
Correct your spelling
forty
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
of the
foregneirs
Correct your spelling
foreigners
foreigner
population do not speak English, so
this
put them in an
ackward
Correct your spelling
awkward
situation that
do
Change the verb form
does
show examples
not let them
to
Change the verb form
apply
show examples
speak with each other. Some of the possible solutions
of
Change preposition
to
show examples
these issues are that the government
increase
Fix the infinitive
to increase
show examples
minimum
Correct article usage
the minimum
show examples
wage salary and reduce the cost of living, so
people
would not have to work two jobs. Having
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
show examples
debts and more affordable monthly rent payments, they might be less
stressful
Replace the word
stressed
show examples
and
decided
Wrong verb form
decide
show examples
to stay at home, and
eventually
Add a comma
,eventually
show examples
they will get along with their
neighbours
. Another possible solution is that the
Correct your spelling
government
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
should
Correct your spelling
establish
stablish
Correct your spelling
establish
local schools for adults to provide free education to learn
a foreign languages
Correct the article-noun agreement
a foreign language
foreign languages
show examples
.
This
might motivate them to attend classes and interact with each other to practice other
people
's
langugage
Correct your spelling
language
.
For instance
, in California, the mayor has
Correct your spelling
established
stablished
Correct your spelling
established
free schools for adults who are interested to learn the local
language
or a foreign
language
, and
this
activity help to interact with other cultures and celebrate their festivities. To conclude, it is less common that
people
interact
Fix the infinitive
to interact
show examples
with their
neighbours
and
this
affect
Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
show examples
the ambience of the local environment;
however
,
this
can be solved by increasing the
Correct your spelling
minimum
minimun
Correct your spelling
minimum
wage and
lower
Wrong verb form
lowering
show examples
the cost of living.
Also
, provide free education for those who want to learn a foreign
language
, and all
these
Correct pronoun usage
which
show examples
might help
people
to interact with their
neighbours
.
Submitted by cuevas14dic on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: