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Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The
first
 bar graph explains the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 while the
second
 line chart depicts the cinema admission in the same countries between 1976 to 2006. As a general trend, US
films
 account for massive shares in both nations.
Besides
, the sales of
this
 industry have been growing in these three decades ,especially since 1985. It is notable that Australian citizens do not enjoy domestic
films
 even though the British watch them more.
Hence
,
instead
 of it,
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Australia,
films
 made in other countries have the
second
 largest share. Whereas the British have UK
films
 as the
second
 most popular
films
. The
second
 line chart outlines the slump of the film industry from
1970s
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the 1970s
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 to 1985 ,especially in the UK but they
had
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recovered and they went up smoothly till the early 21 century.
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