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topic as countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

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It is true that an increasing number of
people
 purchase vehicles for themselves in improving countries around the world. The negative effect of it is outweighed the
environment
 compared to the benefit of it for
people
. The impending essay will discuss its disadvantages for the
environment
. There are many reasons that utilizing personal vehicles is not beneficial for the community
environment
. To start with, when the vast majority of individuals use their own cars it contributes to the emission of carbon dioxide from these transport leading to create opportunities for damaging the
environment
.
As a result
, Air pollution will increase significantly in the country.
This
 has been evidenced by a recent study conducted by the University of Toronto over the
last
 two decades environmental pollution increased by 33% by the increasing number of cars in Toronto.
Additionally
, just in recent ,
,
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years almost most forests are chopped down due to building new roads for
people
 and green places decreased significantly ,especially in modern cities.
However
, in a modern ,nation everyone has their own cars
this
 results in being a comfort for
people
 because they go to their offices faster
instead
 of taking public transport which is inconvenient for some individuals due to waiting long hours. while it is true that it saves communities' time but it damages nature. In conclusion, an increasing number of folks in modern nations purchase new vehicles and take them to the roads, the advantages of
this
 is not
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outwieght
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outweigh
 the cons of that for the
enviroment
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environment
 due to creating
enviromental
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environmental
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