Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extend do you agree?

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society

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,

scientists

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and

experts

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seem to be more important than

musicians

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and

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. Modern

society

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needs

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and

scientists

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to bring more

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technology

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things.

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,

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and

musicians

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also

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play

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role in

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. On one hand, the more important value of modern

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is

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and

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experts

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. They

work

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hard to bring change in

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and provide our latest

technology

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computers, machines, auto machines, etc. In recent years, when there were no

technology

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people

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did not aware

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to do. They really did hard

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for themselves. But nowadays,

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is growing fast. All

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done

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by machines. There is no need for

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to do all kinds of

work

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. Most

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is done by

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like cashiers doing all their jobs on computers and

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prescriptions are all done by computer. There is no need for paper and pen to write a prescription by the doctor

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why they play an important part in the community and

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agree.

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,

musicians

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and

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are only for the enjoyment of

society

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. They perform their songs for fun and enjoyment. They create some smiles and excitement

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the

people

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of the community. In conclusion, The importance of

experts

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and

scientists

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is more important than anyone else.

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,

musicians

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and

artists

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also

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play role in

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society

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.They give relaxing moments and fun time to

people

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. As a

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result both play an important role in

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but

experts

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are more important because they make life easy to make better products.