Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extend do you agree?

In

society

,

scientists

and

experts

seem to be more important than

musicians

and

artists

. Modern

society

needs

experts

and

scientists

to bring more

technology

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things.

However

,

Artists

and

musicians

also

play

an

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role in

society

. On one hand, the more important value of modern

society

is

scientists

and

technology

experts

. They

work

hard to bring change in

society

and provide our latest

technology

for example

computers, machines, auto machines, etc. In recent years, when there were no

technology

people

did not aware

what

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to do. They really did hard

work

for themselves. But nowadays,

technology

is growing fast. All

work

done

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is done

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by machines. There is no need for

people

to do all kinds of

work

. Most

work

is done by

technology

like cashiers doing all their jobs on computers and

doctors

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prescriptions are all done by computer. There is no need for paper and pen to write a prescription by the doctor

that is

why they play an important part in the community and

i

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agree.

On the other hand

,

musicians

and

artists

are only for the enjoyment of

society

. They perform their songs for fun and enjoyment. They create some smiles and excitement

to

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the

people

of the community. In conclusion, The importance of

experts

and

scientists

is more important than anyone else.

However

,

musicians

and

artists

also

play role in

the

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society

.They give relaxing moments and fun time to

people

. As a

,

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result both play an important role in

society

but

experts

are more important because they make life easy to make better products.