You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You shou

#house #friend #news #neighbourhood #addresses #shou

Dear Sania, I hope you are keeping well. I am extremely delighted to share with you that I have recently moved to my new house in Kochi.

This

house is certainly my dream come true. The whole property is built up in an area of 5000 square yards and is covered with Ashoka trees all around. The main attraction is its swimming pool on the terrace which really gives me a feeling of vacation. As you are already aware that I am very fond of nature, you will be pleased to know that I have got 2 beautiful gardens in my neighbourhood where I can just roam and walk around in my free time.

Furthermore

, it is very convenient to access the supermarkets and groceries store as these are situated at a walking distance of just 5-10 min from my home. I am already looking forward to seeing you here soon and sharing my excitement with you.

Therefore

, I have organised a small party on Sunday, 2nd October. I will prepare a barbecue and delicious drinks for us to celebrate the housewarming. See you soon my friend. Yours truly, Sneha

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