Some people feel that music should be taught in schools while others believe it is better to focus on the sciences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
contemporary epoch, whilst opponents hold the belief that musicology is not an essential subject in any curricula, proponents have a diverse view.
Thus
, I am a staunch believer that
music
should be taught at schools, as it helps the
children
to be more active by increasing their cognitive abilities. My contention will be
further
explained. On the one hand, parents believe that learning
music
is not essential.
In other words
, unless parents discover the purpose of learning
music
, they will not let their
children
do so, as they are of the belief that learning
this
subject is a waste of their
children
's time, and it is more important to focus on the scientific
subjects
, so offsprings may get a well-paid job. An eminent example is fathers and mothers in Egypt who force their offspring to replace their
music
lessons with another scientific subject, so they can focus more on studying, and achieve a higher academic degree.
Hence
, what can be said is fathers and mothers do not want their
children
to study
music
, as it is a waste of their offspring's time.
On the other hand
, scientists and I believe that musicological
subjects
help the students to focus on their tasks and improve their cognitive abilities. To clarify, a recent study, showed that when younger ages listen to
music
, it helps them with their drawing skills,
additionally
, their ability to communicate with their friends.
Music
helps to do so, as it helps youngsters to get in a serene mood that helps them to interact with the other
children
and their teachers.
Moreover
, it helps the brain to release dopamine hormone which helps the brain to be active.
Therefore
, not only does
music
helps the
children
to interact with their school's mate, but it
also
can help them to be more active. In conclusion, after
this
essay has shown the above-mentioned points, It can be reiterated that the merits of learning musicological
subjects
outweigh their demerits.
Therefore
, it is recommended that musical
subjects
should be taught in schools.
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