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It has been said that world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Some believe that this is a postive development, while others say that this would bring certain harms to cultures. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the present circumstances,
globalisation
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 has a major role and importance across the world, but some
people
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 believe it has set no boundaries to trade and communication, while others say that
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 would bring certain harm to
cultures
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. In the essay, we will deep dive into the pros and cons of
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 statement.
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,
globalisation
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 across the globe has offered many facilities
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 as trade, communication, transport development and career opportunities. Nowadays, in many countries, trades have given access to many products that they could not afford before.
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, due to
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, communicating is very easy through Internet, message and social media.
On the other hand
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, many counties have the facility of transport due to the trade of cars around the world and
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 expert engineers are being appointed to construct road infrastructures and railways, definitely, improving the quality of life of
people
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. One of the most important factors of
globalisation
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 is it has offered many job opportunities and improved the lifestyle of
people
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.
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, companies like Mcdonald's,Deloitte, and PWC have offered many jobs worldwide
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 to
globalisation
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 which has brought modernisation to many countries, culture is vanishing slowly in our society. Obviously, young
people
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 are disinterested in their own culture and traditions, they are curious about other
cultures
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 and comfort.To exemplify, my daughter does not want to practice the Tamil language
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 in our tradition, but she is interested in modern music and Arts. Unfortunately, it is a fact that
globalisation
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 is bringing to society. As far as the other
cultures
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 are not harming our
people
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 other
cultures
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 are acceptable. In conclusion, global Village's advantages are more significant than its disadvantages.
People
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 are able to have a lifestyle, a secured job and enjoy many facilities. Regarding
cultures
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, it is the
people
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 and the government to help
promoted
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 the
cultures
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.

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Your opinion

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