Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

No doubt that many

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have been planning to set up new renewable

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stations in order to overcome the crisis of high

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prices of

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and gas

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the fact that

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has been a political weapon used by some

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to put pressure on other economies Many scientists and experts confirm that investing in renewable

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is a must due to the fact that

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, gas and coal have been considered

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of pollution

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to being non-renewable

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of

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, the planet has been terribly affected by the fumes of cars and factories that led to a huge problem to the planet which is global warming, even when covid 19 outbroke in all continents, there was a lockdown and

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started to work remotely which led a huge reduction in the pollution around the world and it was obviously stated by worldwide mass media that ozone layer has decreased significantly, the

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important urge that pushes

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in that direction is that economies have been in danger due to using of

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as a political weapon that's why they started to solve

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crisis by looking for different suppliers. One of the reasons some governments invest in solar

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is that it's cheaper and if consider Australia as our example, the government has noticed that the cost of setting up normal

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stations or extending the lines of

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to far areas is much more expensive than financing the process of setting up solar panels and electric batteries in these far cities, some

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who have done that confirm that it's a huge investment but it's worthy because sometimes they consume less

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than the panels produce so the rest is sent back to the panel and they get paid for these watts. As far as I'm concerned, I agree that governments have to find alternative

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of

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because it's important to rely on various

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because there's no guarantee that some

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are going to be working all days of the year, some stations require some maintenance which leads to partial pausing of the operation and

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you have to have another source to satisfy the consumption of

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and the industry as well, some

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tend to get loans to finance the

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sector to reduce the prices of

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to both

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and factories which is a big danger to the economy on the long term. In conclusion, it's a must to invest in renewable and alternative

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due to many reasons and

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fact won't help us do without traditional

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but to save the economy and be ready for the future