Children's educaton is expensive. In some countries the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
Educating
children
in certain countries could be exorbitantly high whereas in other countries it could be more cost-effective, ,however
it involves a cost which is either fully or partially paid by the government
or public. This
essay will include the advantages and disadvantages of governments paying for the education
expenses of children
. In my opinion, I feel that the government
should be ideally contributing to developing a literate generation either by partially or fully absorbing these expenses.
The primary advantage will be developing intelligent and literate citizens. If education
is charged, middle-income and lower-income earners might not allocate their disposable income to educate children
as they might not consider "education
" as a basic need. Therefore
, it is the government
's responsibility to ensure the citizens of the country get a fair amount of education
despite income levels and this
could be achieved if education
is provided free or partially free. Secondly
, since the government
is collecting taxes from the public they are responsible for giving back to society. One of the ways they could do this
is by allocating this
tax money to education
. This
will have a long-term impact and a better return on capital as the educated workforce will bring investors, and foreign currency and contribute to the overall development of the economy. This
could be clearly seen in developed countries such
as Canada where free education
has changed the literacy levels of the citizens of the country.
However
, the major disadvantage would be that free education
will be misused in certain instances. The higher and upper-middle-income earners would also
take advantage and have their children
in government
schools and universities. This
might lead to a larger disparity of income within the country as a whole.
In conclusion, In my opinion, I believe that government
should at least contribute partially to educating children
as education
could be considered an investment and it will have long-term benefits that will outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by nayomi28 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite