Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the present age, whether attending

university

provides more benefits than getting a job without a

degree

has sparked much debate. Some people assert that going to college is the only right thing to do for your future, whereas many others argue that a

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not that crucial. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view. It is generally believed that without a

university

degree

you will not be able to get a proper job. Since the stereotype is so deep in our core, we can not see the situation in

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. After graduating

school

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, students that choose not to go

university

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can start earning money. By doing that, those young people are able to pay the cost of their living.

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, some graduates feel more passion

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their dream, than some

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. Thereby, if a student chooses to let go of the

diploma

and reach for their dream, they might end up earning more money than they would have earned in a normal job with a

degree

.

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singer and songwriter Billie Eilish did not attend college, but by pursuing her passion, music, she became very popular and rich.

In contrast

, getting a

diploma

might open

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some locked doors. Usually, employers look for people that have higher education and do not employ humans who only have a school

diploma

.

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could result in you not being able to pursue your career and being unemployed.

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,

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is like a new chapter of life. When attending

university

or a college you will definitely find new friends, relationships and hobbies. Which will result in you finding new experiences. Having considered both views, I believe that attending

university

is important for you and your future career.

However

, I assert that

university

is not as crucial as it is portrayed in our lives and you can definitely get by without a

university

degree

.