Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, A lot of university
student
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study
various kinds of
subject's
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they don't interested
.
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,
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Few individuals
also
believe that
the
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waste
of
time
. I agree with
this
notion, It's a
waste
of money and
time
resources and I will discuss
this
essay in the upcoming fourth paragraphs.
To begin
with the agreement, Many
college's
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coffered boring
subject
's for their
learners
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learner's
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departments because
student's
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students
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accept these tasks for their leisure
time
. To explain, because it's will be cheap cost and learning
a
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new things and it's will be useful in their career
such
as a job opportunity.
For example
, In Australian news channels reveal that the Victoria school forces
for
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their
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students
student
studens
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students
study
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to study
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boring assignments
such
as Science and Maths.
Hence
, it's useful for learners as a chance to job in multimedia companies and
it's
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it
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will be beneficial for life. To commence with the disagreement, Jobs will
required
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a good skill for their
emplooyers
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employers
employees
and when the
student
learn
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a
frequently
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type of exams skills It's useful of their jobs
time
. To explicated, A lot of students should
waste
for
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their
time
playing
in
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various kinds
for
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of
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games on
internet
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.
However
, compared to
study
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studying
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boring papers.
For instance
, The British students
for
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in
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their schools provided
a difficult tasks
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difficult tasks
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in
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during
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their
study
time
because Britain authorities thought the
student
learn
a news skills
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news skills
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such
as
developer
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sport's
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it
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apply
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will be good for their community.
Thus
,
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on the
student
taste
what
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they choose in future
study
and it's not
waste
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a waste
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of
time
learned
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learning
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a
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apply
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different aspects. In conclusion,
Although
all boring
subject
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subjects
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will be
benefits
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for their career
time
.
Moreover
, learners think is important they don't like any
subject's
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subject
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but
i
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it
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will be useful in their hard times.
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