You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend and say - What was the accident? - When did it happen? - Suggest how the damage can be fixed.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Raj, How are you? Hope you are doing well and enjoying your holidays. I'm writing

this

Linking Words

letter to you to apologize to you that

accidently

Correct your spelling

accidentally

broke

Wrong verb form

breaking

show examples

window

Add an article

the window

a window

show examples

of your home. I really appreciate

you

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

that you permitted me to stay in your

appartment

Correct your spelling

apartment

while I'm searching for

rental

Add an article

a rental

the rental

show examples

house. Yesterday while doing cleaning in your house, I

unfortunately

Add the comma(s)

, unfortunately,

show examples

damage one of the bedroom window glass because I was in hurry to pick

the

Change preposition

up the

show examples

bus for

office

Correct article usage

the office

show examples

. In

this

Linking Words

accident, I hurt my right hand very badly too. I know that you renovated

Correct your spelling

apartment

Correct article usage

an appartment

show examples

appartment

Correct your spelling

apartment

recently. So, I would like to assure you that please do not take tension about

this

Linking Words

. I will arrange

for

Change preposition

show examples

fix

Correct article usage

a fix

show examples

and bear all the expenses. In fact, I've already spoken to

worker

Add an article

the worker

a worker

show examples

area

Add an article

the area

show examples

and he will replace the glass soon. Once again I'm really sorry to bother you on your holidays. Yours lovingly, Akash

adp14179Thu Sep 29 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

1
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary children. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Given that the global lifestyle and culture have undergone radical changes over the last century, acquiring interpersonal and intrapersonal skills such as a new language has assumed importance among people. Such skills are beneficial to be learned at young ages, in particular through schools, as children are more capable of learning. However, a question remains to be asked whether all the aspects of this course of action are negative or positive.
8.5
band
You live in a room in college which you can share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter • Describe the situation • Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
I am writing to complain about some problems with the arrangement of my room which is shared with another student in the college.
8
band
Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?
A slim woman is considered to be the most suitable model for a healthy body by many social media nowadays. In this essay, I will outline the drawbacks of such a misunderstanding as well as provide solutions to this pressing issue.
6.5
band
Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are many different kinds of activities for children to spend their leisure time. Some people assert that children must attend group activities based on their carers' encouragement if they have free time whereas many others argue that the best thing is for children to let them learn everything on their own. Personally, I am in favour of the first view.
8
band
A friend from overseas is planning to visit you soon. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are looking forward to the visit Describe the accommodations you have available for your friend Suggest some things to do during the visit.
How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. I am so happy to receive your letter in which you mentioned that you are planning to visit Canada next month.

You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend and say - What was the accident? - When did it happen? - Suggest how the damage can be fixed.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary children. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?

Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A friend from overseas is planning to visit you soon. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are looking forward to the visit Describe the accommodations you have available for your friend Suggest some things to do during the visit.