You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend and say - What was the accident? - When did it happen? - Suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Raj, How are you? Hope you are doing well and enjoying your holidays. I'm writing

this

letter to you to apologize to you that

accidently

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accidentally

broke

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breaking

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window

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the window

a window

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of your home. I really appreciate

you

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apply

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that you permitted me to stay in your

appartment

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apartment

while I'm searching for

rental

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a rental

the rental

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house. Yesterday while doing cleaning in your house, I

unfortunately

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, unfortunately,

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damage one of the bedroom window glass because I was in hurry to pick

the

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up the

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bus for

office

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the office

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. In

this

accident, I hurt my right hand very badly too. I know that you renovated

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apartment

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an appartment

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appartment

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apartment

recently. So, I would like to assure you that please do not take tension about

this

. I will arrange

for

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fix

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a fix

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and bear all the expenses. In fact, I've already spoken to

worker

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the worker

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area

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the area

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and he will replace the glass soon. Once again I'm really sorry to bother you on your holidays. Yours lovingly, Akash

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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