You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend and say - What was the accident? - When did it happen? - Suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Raj, How are you? Hope you are doing well and enjoying your holidays. I'm writing
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letter to you to apologize to you that
accidently
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accidentally

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broke
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breaking

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window
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the window
a window

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of your home. I really appreciate
you
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apply

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that you permitted me to stay in your
appartment
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apartment

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while I'm searching for
rental
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a rental
the rental

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house. Yesterday while doing cleaning in your house, I
unfortunately
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, unfortunately,

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damage one of the bedroom window glass because I was in hurry to pick
the
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up the

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bus for
office
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the office

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. In
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

accident, I hurt my right hand very badly too. I know that you renovated
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apartment

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an appartment
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appartment
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apartment

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recently. So, I would like to assure you that please do not take tension about
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

. I will arrange
for
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to

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fix
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a fix

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and bear all the expenses. In fact, I've already spoken to
worker
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the worker
a worker

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in
area
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the area

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and he will replace the glass soon. Once again I'm really sorry to bother you on your holidays. Yours lovingly, Akash

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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