In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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not existed, would many individuals overeating it in some lands have

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health issues

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The problematic nature of the mentioned type of

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is being tried to be solved with policies like higher

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rates for it. The latter can be viewed as vital or not looking at its benefits and drawbacks. To embark on, raising the level of

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for fast

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goods can be effective from some perspectives. Probably, a higher price would have a consequence of a lower figure of poorer members of society buying

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type of

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. Inevitably, it would become essential for those humans to start considering other choices for nurturing themselves. Choices

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as fruits and vegetables, which are regarded as more healthy most times, might become increasingly attractive.

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quickly prepared

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consumption might lead to a plummeted calorie intake for many individuals. For

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reason, it is possible that not that many members of society would suffer from obesity, which is typically caused by overeating. Many other problems,

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, insufficient intake of vitamins, which in rapid time presented foods do not contain a lot, may be solved. In spite of the described positive impacts, the outcome of a heightened

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rate for in a quick time processed foods might

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be negative or without impact.

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, it is possible that many may begin to start having mental health problems. In fact, tasty

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is well-known to release the happiness hormone dopamine, which triggers a rewarding feeling. Some might have not been advised how to deal with not experiencing

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emotion due to not being able to afford

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causing it. What is more,

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proposed solution would not affect the audience of the rich. They are able to afford what they want at almost any

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,

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, an adequate

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upswing is predicted to impact

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group only very lightly.

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allows

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to conclude

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the discussed idea of making the costs of fast

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go up, utilizing governmental tools, may seem an attractive one, it could be useful only to a limited extent. The emotional well-being of humans and the unaffected rich are elements that empower

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view.

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, these may be reasons why

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is not implemented fully in many places of the world and there is a reasonable ground for agreeing with them.