Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, the number of patients who prefer alternative medicines and treatments rather than visiting

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are increased. I think it has negative effects on human health, and

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essay will mention some of its disadvantages.

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with, some people have a strong tendency toward trying alternative methods

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of visiting

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for their diseases.

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, the

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reason is they probably do not get positive results in terms of their disease after visiting

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.

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, it encourages them to use other ways for treatment,

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as eating some special local drugs or vegetables.

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, it could be very dangerous because

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method does not have a scientific basis.

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, one of my cousins got the coronavirus, so

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of going to a hospital, he preferred eating some traditional drugs.

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, not only it did not help him but

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made his disease worse.

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, the

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reason is going to a hospital and visiting

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usually are very costly.

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led to reducing the amount of willingness regarding going to a hospital and motivates them to use a cheaper way of treatment. In fact,

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could be hazardous, and even in some cases lead to death.

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, in Iran, the cost of surgery is very high, and

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year one of my colleagues had a heart problem, and because of the cost of surgery he preferred to do some exercises which led to death, and it was so tragic. In conclusion, in my view, using any type of treatment

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of visiting usual

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could be very dangerous and have a lot of drawbacks.

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, to prevent

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, the government should educate people about disadvantages, and

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decline the cost of visiting

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or going to a hospital for treatments.