Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility. others believe that every individuals responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, it's considerable argued that
save
the Wrong verb form
saving
environment
is the responsibility of authorities. While,
the other side individuals think that every person is handle Remove the comma
apply
responsibilities
for it. I will discuss both views and give my own perspective in the upcoming fourth paragraphs.
Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
To begin
, The environment
is populated day by day and law-maker will be responsibly for that and it's
duties to all government workers. To explain, Correct your spelling
their
The
any nations will be provided Correct article usage
apply
the
facilities for their citizens and it will be important for all massive to care about the Add the preposition
with the
climate
and some bad things should be avoid
for their Change the verb form
be avoided
environment
such
as Garbage is dynamically increasing every year. For example
, In Australian news channels reveal headlines that air pollution rising very fastly and authority will be not controllable and it will affect of
their public health. Change preposition
apply
Hence
, It will be big
impact Add an article
a big
for
all global development because experts will Change preposition
on
be not find
valuable solutions.
Change the verb form
not find
Furthermore
, The world's international industries try to control environmental issues but it will need a big time for Scientific research. In addition
. Many British scientists said that it will be difficult for every people to save their climate
matter and many universities will be working on projects on how to environmental protect
. Replace the word
protection
For instance
, The [UHO] United Health Organizations exposed that the environment
is less safe for their community-based it will be big
impact on their nation's future Add an article
a big
climate
.
In conclusion, Although
environmental responsibilities for both kinds of people are important to a safe Correct word choice
apply
climate
. Moreover
, It will also
be beneficial for all human beings and it's useful for the environment
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