School are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students to find a job. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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Nowadays, Many schools are spending more time teaching historical
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as history.
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, Few individuals believe
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that schools should teach any kinds of useful
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as English and computer they help in searching for jobs in their life. I agree with
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notion, it will be beneficial to learn new
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and I will discuss them in the upcoming paragraphs.
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with the agreement, College Authority will be provided with many
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types of
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as computers. To explicated, The nation's government will be required useful
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in high-paid work because International
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workers have so many different
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they learn during their university time.
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their own way and in all popular industries
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as Nike
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brand job requires various kinds of
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.
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, When students learn different
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in their Childhood time it will
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be useful in future. To commence with the disagreement, In school principals teach their nation traditional
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and
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well knows for their learner's.
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, When childbirth in any region it will important to learn about
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country's historical age. To explain, Many governments know the history of their region and it will be useful to their upcoming generations.
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, In Britain, all elementary schools will be taught their person to learn the British army history.
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, it's will be useful to learn traditional paper and it will worth in
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years. In conclusion,
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Both subject's exams will be beneficial to their personal life and countries.
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, Many job opportunities needed to see their employer all types of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Well-rounded education
  • Cultural and historical contexts
  • Vocational training
  • Digital literacy
  • Holistic development
  • Practical skills
  • Critical thinking
  • Problem-solving
  • Balanced approach
  • Adaptability
  • Job market demands
  • Dynamic job market
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