School are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students to find a job. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Nowadays, Many schools are spending more time teaching historical
subjects
such
as history. However
, Few individuals believe also
that schools should teach any kinds of useful subjects
such
as English and computer they help in searching for jobs in their life. I agree with this
notion, it will be beneficial to learn new skills
and I will discuss them in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with the agreement, College Authority will be provided with many frequently
types of Change the adverb
frequent
subjects
such
as computers. To explicated, The nation's government will be required useful skills
in high-paid work because International industries
workers have so many different Change the noun form
industry
skills
they learn during their university time. For example
, In Australian news channels reveal headlines that high-paid salaries will be beneficial for
their own way and in all popular industries Change preposition
in
such
as Nike this
brand job requires various kinds of skills
. Thus
, When students learn different subjects
in their Childhood time it will also
be useful in future.
To commence with the disagreement, In school principals teach their nation traditional subjects
and it
well knows for their learner's. Change the pronoun
its
Furthermore
, When childbirth in any region it will important to learn about their
country's historical age. To explain, Many governments know the history of their region and it will be useful to their upcoming generations. Change the word
the
For instance
, In Britain, all elementary schools will be taught their person to learn the British army history. Hence
, it's will be useful to learn traditional paper and it will worth in next
years.
In conclusion, Although
Both subject's exams will be beneficial to their personal life and countries. Moreover
, Many job opportunities needed to see their employer all types of skills
such
as Thinking and communicating with others massive.Submitted by razab5469 on
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