Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or to valuable to be shared freely.

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Most people are of the view that some
information
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should be protected without publishing because it may contain very important details
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scientific research or business statistics. While
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others
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believe that
information
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should be published freely to create awareness among people. I strongly believe that
information
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must keep with almost
confidentiality
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without providing any access. On the one hand,
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are
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good
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source for
improve
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knowledge about
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range of subjects.
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, university students are able to get many details for their research,presentation and case studies. As well as, it is easy for researchers, experiments and new
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source for
start
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new
business
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businesses
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or
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companies and got many benefits
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as, increase sales and production. Free access to the field of medicine is the most important
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all over the
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. In covid 19
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pandemic
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many people survive
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using medical
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devices
advice
advices
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.
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, most of the
information
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must be protected because it will be the future of the
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.
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,
such
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data
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nuclear weapons or biological weapons if it goes to the wrong hand it will be the beginning of the dark era
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the
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.
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, they are commercially valuable. Many secrets of development and how to boost the business
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with
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the data.
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, software companies earn lots of money than others.
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, all the countries have secured data that are impossible to publish. In conclusion,
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is the base of the
world
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's economy and security.
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, it is very important to keep
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security.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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