Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or to valuable to be shared freely.

Most people are of the view that some

information

should be protected without publishing because it may contain very important details

such

as

,

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scientific research or business statistics. While

other

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believe that

information

should be published freely to create awareness among people. I strongly believe that

information

must keep with almost

confidentiality

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without providing any access. On the one hand,

information

are

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good

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source for

improve

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knowledge about

wide

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a wide

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range of subjects.

For instance

, university students are able to get many details for their research,presentation and case studies. As well as, it is easy for researchers, experiments and new

invasion

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.

Hence

,

good

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source for

start

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new

business

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businesses

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or

develop

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developing

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companies and got many benefits

such

as, increase sales and production. Free access to the field of medicine is the most important

for

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all over the

world

. In covid 19

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pandemic

pandamic

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many people survive

with

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using medical

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devices

advice

advices

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pieces of advice

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.

On the other hand

, most of the

information

must be protected because it will be the future of the

world

.

Specially

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,

such

data

of

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nuclear weapons or biological weapons if it goes to the wrong hand it will be the beginning of the dark era

to

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the

world

.

Moreover

, they are commercially valuable. Many secrets of development and how to boost the business

are include

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with

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the data.

For example

, software companies earn lots of money than others.

In addition

, all the countries have secured data that are impossible to publish. In conclusion,

information

is the base of the

world

's economy and security.

Therefore

, it is very important to keep

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security.