Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or to valuable to be shared freely.
Most people are of the view that some
information
should be protected without publishing because it may contain very important details such
as,
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other
believe that Correct pronoun usage
others
information
should be published freely to create awareness among people. I strongly believe that information
must keep with almost confidentiality
without providing any access.
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confidential
information
are
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is
good
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a good
improve
knowledge about Change the verb form
improving
wide
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For instance
, university students are able to get many details for their research,presentation and case studies. As well as, it is easy for researchers, experiments and new invasion
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developing
such
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world
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pandemic
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devices
advice
advices
.
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advice
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bits of advice
On the other hand
, most of the information
must be protected because it will be the future of the world
. Specially
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Especially
such
data of
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world
. Moreover
, they are commercially valuable. Many secrets of development and how to boost the business are include
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For example
, software companies earn lots of money than others. In addition
, all the countries have secured data that are impossible to publish.
In conclusion, information
is the base of the world
's economy and security. Therefore
, it is very important to keep under
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