Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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important role in our life, you can find it on
Internet
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easily or you can get
informations
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information
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around the world from
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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. In spite of the development of technology, newspapers will remain the most important source of
news
.
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of
provide
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news
, of
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Internet
do it
quicklier
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quicker
than the
newspaper
.
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, it was not as exactly as the
newspaper
. By virtue of the variety of
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, only experts can find which were the facts
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newspaper
. It is not
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they don’t post on
Internet
, when they do that there are many reacts and comments, sometimes bad and good.
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isn’t a safe place to read
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. If you
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know the
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around the world, honestly you should buy a
newspaper
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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