you recently had your sanitary ware and taps replaced. You are unhappy with the job of contractor. Write a letter to the contractor for the same. In your letter • say what you are not satisfied with • say what you want the contractor to do • discuss time coordination of both parties for the repairing work

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Dear Mr John, I am Martin Root. I live in Forest park and writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding some work done by your workers related to sanitary ware and the replacement of taps at my house

last

week. Please note that I am a little disappointed about the maintenance work.

Firstly

, the taps which have been fixed in the kitchen and bathroom are not as per my choice.

Secondly

, the water is leaking dropwise even though the tabs are closed.

Lastly

, there is a minor crack in sanitary ware installed in the guest bathroom. In order to solve the problem, kindly advise your staff to change the sanitary ware and replace the tabs with silver colour as per my earlier selection.

Moreover

, they may need to clean the bathroom wall as some white cement is deposited over there. You may ask your supervisor to come for work

Saturday at 9:00 AM

otherwise

let them call me to fix the

available schedule based on my convenience. I am looking forward to hearing and rectifying the issues at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Martin Root.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

187 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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