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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living . What is your opinion about this? What other times in history would be interesting to live in?

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One group of
people
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 believe that the recent
time
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 is the best period of history to be existing. I completely agree with
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 view.
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, another group would be interested to live in the
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. Some
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 and I think that these days are the most attractive
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 for living and there are several reasons for that belief.
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, the living facilities are in the best situation. Recently,
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 have used the technology at a maximum rate so these circumstances lead to
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high quality
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life
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 for all communities.
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, the
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 rhythm is increasing. It may be hard for
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 to live backwards the history because they did not have enough adjustability for living in other historical decades.
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, it would be so difficult for new generations who have an addiction to smartphones to live 100 years earlier than now. Another group of
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 tend to be alive in the
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 as it is always a mystery and very young populations have
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 dream of they could live in that
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.
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, many adventure books are about travelling over
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 and going to the
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life
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.
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, human brains have a creative thinking system which has affected their lifestyles. It is an interesting idea that
people
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 could see the forward of their
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. Because they know about the past but the
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 is always unpredictable and mysterious. In conclusion, in my ,view many
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 believe that the recent
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 of
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 is acceptable for many reasons and some groups would like to be alive in the
future
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.
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