You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there •invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..
Dear Tom
The reason I am writing to you is to inform you of my plans for the summer.
To begin
with, I have booked a stunning house on 10-12 June, which has its own pool and a jacuzzi. Moreover
, it is located near a large lake, where you can find some attractions such
as yachts and fishing. The house is two-storey and there are 5 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms and a home cinema. Outside are located a golf course, private beach and a tennis court.
Secondly
, I would like to tell you about our plans. On the first day, we are going to go shopping, buy groceries and have a barbecue. On the second day, we can go to a club or a restaurant. I am sure there are a lot of opportunities, so it won't be hard to decide what to do.
To sum up
, I want to invite you on that trip with my friends. We will definitely have a great time together. Text me as soon as possible, so we can discuss the nuances.
I look forward to your reply
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coherence cohesion
You've done well in following a logical structure, separating different aspects of your message into distinct paragraphs, which enhances readability. To further improve coherence, consider linking sentences more seamlessly with transitional phrases that guide the reader through your narrative.
task achievement
You have thoroughly accomplished the task by describing the house, detailing your plans, and inviting your friend, all in a tone appropriate for a letter to a friend. For an even higher score, add more specific details about how you feel about the house and the activities to add depth and personal insight to your writing.
coherence cohesion
Using clear paragraphs for each topic made your letter easy to follow and engage with.
task achievement
You effectively used a friendly and open tone, which is perfect for a letter to a friend, inviting them to join you.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,