Why is mass media important? Is it primarily a positive or negative influence? Give your opinion based on your own knowledge and experience.

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Mass
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media
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is the
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marketing
marketting
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marketing
of ideas
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products to
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through the use of social
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or the internet. The idea of the advert is bombarded to an individual which eventually makes them curious and
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to buy the product. There are positive effects
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media
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, it could be used for good causes
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as helping
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in need.
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, in 2019 when Sri Lanka
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suffered
sufferred
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suffered
a terrorist attack. The situation was spread through
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which helped the community collect enough funds or donations to ease the
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pain in the form of financial
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. These
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of activities greatly benefit the community. Another advantage of
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is that various job
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opportunities
oppurtunities
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opportunities
are created. Jobs
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as social
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manager, editor, producer, etc are created.
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decreases the percentage of unemployed
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in a certain country. It could
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let the general public aware of ongoing
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existing in the world that they've never previously heard of. Again, in return benefitting victims of
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could result in
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getting misinformed or incorrect information.
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, some malicious hackers use
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as a platform to earn money unfairly by advertising it as donations. The repeated and
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brute force
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frustrate
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and put a bad brand image of a certain organisation to the public.
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, annual sales for the company would significantly decrease which leads to reduced profits. There are a number of benefits as well as drawbacks of
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, I personally think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and
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advertising through
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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