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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 word

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Over a decade, there is a heated debate going on that Taking complete
Eductionis
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Education is
 too expensive due to
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the university
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university
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university's
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 huge
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fee
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fees
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.
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 has started shattering the dreams of numerous
students
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to study
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up
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apply
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a
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apply
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light on whether
education
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 should be free to everyone or should take
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a fee
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fee
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fees
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 from
students
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 , regardless of income. I opine that
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education
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 should be non-chargeable.
Education
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 has always played a crucial part
for
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in
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 the development of human
being
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beings
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 so that they can learn
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skills and build their career. Across the globe in all countries,Affording good
education
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 has become a nutcracker job for parents due to hefty
fee
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 structure.Due to
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 , Many
students
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 didn’t get
the
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apply
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admissions
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admission
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in
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to
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 prestige
college
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colleges
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 and they stop
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the study
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study
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studying
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.
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 results in
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unemployment as people don’t have skills.
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,
These situation
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also
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 increases
the
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suicide rates and other crime.
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 to
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,
Students
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 suppose to take a loan
on
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at
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 huge interest rates to complete
the
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their
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 study and it takes a decade to repay the loan which puts
students
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into
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under
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 mental pressure.
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few
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a few
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 countries like Canada and Australia, the
education
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fee
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 is very minimal or nil.
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Results
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results
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 in more literacy rate
of
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in
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nation
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the nation
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 which helps to hike the
economy
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economic
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 rate of
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country
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the country
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. According to
survey
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a survey
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 conducted by Harvard,The
country
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 offering free
education
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 produces more
enterpreneurs
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entrepreneurs
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self sufficient
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self-sufficient
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 to earn good money.
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Country
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A country
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 like Canada has
came
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 into
developed
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the developed
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 nation list from
developing
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the developing
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 nation list which is
big
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a big
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 achievement. To conclude, Universities should make
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education
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 free for everyone and To combat
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 , Government should take
necessary
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the necessary
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 steps to resolve
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 issue which will
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definitely
definately
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definitely
 increase the literacy rate,
skilled
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the skilled
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 talent of
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country
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the country
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 and generate more employment.
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