You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter:  explain what will be happening  offer your apologies in advance  invite her to join the celebration

#graduation #party #saturday #night #people #barbecue #neighbour #offer #apologies #advance #celebration

Dear Mrs Smith, I am writing to let you know that I have organized a graduation party

week, on Saturday at 7 pm. Let me explain the situation in detail, I am a student at Stanford University, majoring in commerce degree,

last

week we received our results and our entire batch of 50 students graduated which was a very proud moment for our class and to celebrate the occasion I have invited my class for a barbecue party. The celebration will be held outdoors, and music and games will be played to lighten the mood to have everyone reconnect on

this

auspicious occasion. I am well aware that you prefer sleeping early and refrain from loud music and to ease the situation, I have requested the DJ to play the music on a softer note.

Although

we plan to put a hard stop at 12 am, there might be a few who would prefer to leave later than that.

Hence

, I wanted to convey my apologies if

this

celebration may bring any discomfort to you. I would like to invite you to

this

party, as I am well aware that you are fond of dancing and barbecues. It would be a delight to have you join us. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Tiera Vaswani

Submitted by jai302 on Sat Oct 01 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

217 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, when there is more and more automation available in our hands than ever before, many adults prefer to work at home compared to staying in a cubicle at the workplace, and children are starting to study from home as well. From my perspective, this is a positive development, although there are still some drawbacks.
4.5
band
Some people think that all school students should learn a foreign language. Others think that a students should not be required to learn a foreign language if he or she does not have talent for it Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought that every school pupils should have to learn a foreign laguage, other people believe that the students do not need to learn a foreign language if they do not have skills. In my poinin, i consider that every student sould have the knowledge of foreign language to perform in this competitive world.
<4
band
Nowadays,a growing number of peoples with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?
Thank you for your email.
6
band
People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such services?
People are using a lot of online language translation apps.
6
band
Task 2 Some countries invest in specialized sport facilities for top athletes but not for the average person. Is this a positive or a negative development ?
Some countries invest in specialized sport facilities for top athletes but not for the average person. Is this a positive or a negative development ?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people think that all school students should learn a foreign language. Others think that a students should not be required to learn a foreign language if he or she does not have talent for it Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,a growing number of peoples with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?

People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such services?

Task 2 Some countries invest in specialized sport facilities for top athletes but not for the average person. Is this a positive or a negative development ?