You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter:  explain what will be happening  offer your apologies in advance  invite her to join the celebration

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Dear Mrs Smith, I am writing to let you know that I have organized a graduation party

week, on Saturday at 7 pm. Let me explain the situation in detail, I am a student at Stanford University, majoring in commerce degree,

last

week we received our results and our entire batch of 50 students graduated which was a very proud moment for our class and to celebrate the occasion I have invited my class for a barbecue party. The celebration will be held outdoors, and music and games will be played to lighten the mood to have everyone reconnect on

this

auspicious occasion. I am well aware that you prefer sleeping early and refrain from loud music and to ease the situation, I have requested the DJ to play the music on a softer note.

Although

we plan to put a hard stop at 12 am, there might be a few who would prefer to leave later than that.

Hence

, I wanted to convey my apologies if

this

celebration may bring any discomfort to you. I would like to invite you to

this

party, as I am well aware that you are fond of dancing and barbecues. It would be a delight to have you join us. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Tiera Vaswani

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