Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days most parents are of the view that it is precious for children to participate in extra curriculum activities for their future outcomes. Whereas, others opinion that, children should have rest and joy at that

time

. In my point of view, I agree with the

first

sentence.

Firstly

, after-school education provides huge benefits to their present and future development.

For instance

, joining with singing, dancing and painting brings brain refreshments because those are good meditations for reducing mental stress. Not only that but they

also

study these are causes for their ultimate career

such

as

,

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musician, painter or sportsman and earn money or get famous through

this

.

In addition

, increase intellect, thought process, creativity and relaxation techniques.

Finally

, in

this

modern world, most kids stay home alone until their parents come back.

Therefore

this

may lead to unsafe in their future.

Then

it is better to do extra education.

On the other hand

in

this

comparative world, some people think their children must have joy and relax after school . It is good for managing

time

such

as,doing homework, and being ready for the

next

day and day-to-day activities at the right

time

.

Moreover

, need

time

for relaxation just as staying with family members, playing with siblings as well a picnic. Stay with a loved one and do activities that are most suitable for better physical and mental health. In conclusion, it is important to learn extra education rather than stay with family after studying the school.

Although

, parents must be aware of the favouriting of kids that they would like or dislike. Mainly, imminent development is based on

this

process.