Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, citizens have huge disponibility to junk

food

.

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Although

Althoug

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fast

food

is tasty and cheap, I

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believe

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belive

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believe

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the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because it

lead

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leads

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to obesity. It

is well know

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is well known

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that most

of

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the

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citizens feel interested in consuming fast

food

because it is so addictive by having too much salt, and

this

lead

to

overeat

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overeating

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.

Firstly

,

this

food

is so tasty that

people

do not know when to stop, and

this

lead

to

eat

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eating

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bigger

proportions

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portions

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of

food

.

Secondly

,

yunk

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junk

food

is so cheap that

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anyone

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any one

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anyone

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can have access to

this

food

, and the size of

these

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this

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type of

food

is huge for a very

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inexpensive

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unexpensive

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inexpensive

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price.

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cause

that

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many families opt to visit places

such

as

MacDonalds

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MacDonald

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or Carls juniors.

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, In The

united

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States,

the

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obesity in children is common

in

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the

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whole country because companies that sell

yunk

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junk

food

give away gumble size

package

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packages

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of

food

for less than five dollars.

However

,

this

sounds tempting, I believe is preferable to measure the portion of

food

given to

people

, and avoid eating too much salty and unhealthy

food

. It is essential that society know how greasy

food

affect

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affects

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their health

that

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and that

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this

might

lead

to chronic diseases. Obesity is

number

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the number

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one disease among the population in the United States because

people

usually tend to overeat.

Moreover

, being obese is not just

matter

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a matter

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of appearance

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because

becasue

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because

this

lead

to

suffer

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suffering

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from diseases

such

as high cholesterol, liver

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disease

diease

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disease

, and diabetes type two.

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,

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it is

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acceptable

aceptable

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acceptable

to eat greasy

food

once a month because it is so tasty,

this

should not be a habit for our community. To explain

further

, the

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vast

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bast

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majority of Hispanics living in The United States suffer from Diabetes because they ignore

to eat

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eating

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small portions, and tend to eat too much greasy

food

,

so

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this

lead

to

chonic

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chronic

disease. I believe it is important to prevent illnesses coming

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from

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form

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from

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eating too much and

people

need to choose healthy choices when it comes to

eat

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eating

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. To conclude,

although

yunk

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junk

food

is tasty and

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inexpensive

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unexpensive

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inexpensive

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to acquire, it is preferable to be aware

about

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of

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all the diseases a person can suffer

for

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from

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eating unhealthy. For these

reasons

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the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.