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Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#software #language #people
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Even though
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Even though
, nowadays,
the
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technology
techknology
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technology
 has a variety of applications of
softwears
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software
of
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language
 translation,
however
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people
are still need
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 to
getrequirment
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get equipment
get requirement
another languages
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 which are
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valuable
valuble
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valuable
. I
totaly
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totally
 agree with the point and
this
 essay explores why I sit with
this
 view. Learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 offers crucial
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benefits
benifits
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benefits
 to
the
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society.
This
 is because
people
 can be enjoyed their life with family after
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getting
geting
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getting
 a job which is
higher
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the higher
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 salary in
another nations
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another nation
other nations
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 easily. In
another words
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, various vacancies are available in the job market.
For example
, when
open
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an open
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internent's
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internet's
internet
 official page
of
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canada
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 is visible many
professions
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professionals
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to
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enter and get
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permanent
perment
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permanent
 residence working visas for two years in Canada who understand French. Another crucial advantage is that the
taurist
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tourist
tourists
 who are able to
speaks
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local
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the local
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language
 show their respect and
the
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love for the local culture,
Also
,
as a result
, possible to extend
people
's position and hospitality
further
.
In addition
, speaking a
second
language
 enhance their chance of
suceed
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succeed
of
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 life.
This
 is because
people
 can enter the world through
internet
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the internet
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 and from
another
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other
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 social media
such
 as
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YouTube
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You Tube
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YouTube
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 and make some
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excellent
exellent
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excellent
presentation
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presentations
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.
For instance
,
Mr.
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 Martin John, who was
famous
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a famous
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 Sri Lankan you tuber who speaks and
write
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writes
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 many
anguages
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languages
 has
have
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achived
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achieved
 30,000000
subcribers
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subscribers
 in a few years. Most of
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subscribers
subcibers
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the subcibers
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 were from abroad from all over the world. In conclusion,
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although
allthough
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although
availability
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the availability
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 of
manay
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many
language
 facilities and translation websites, it
is still need
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still needs
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 to
gets
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get
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 reality
language
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to speak
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speak
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spoken
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 and practice means it
give
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gives
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 many merits to
people
's
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lifetime
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life time
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lifetime
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