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Many people join distance-learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is the online learning that many people attend to used in recent years ; which has been modified by the technology’s development.
However
, other people believe that the same advantages
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 attending colleges or universities could not be brought up by that learning method . Personally speaking ,I think that
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online learning is far from presenting the same quality and pros as traditional learning associations do.
This
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 and most important reason is that traditional learning associations
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 as universities
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 do not only bring
students
 into a professional learning space which is the campus
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but
also
 provide them with scheduled lessons .
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 helps university
students
 to keep up with the workload in order to maximise their field skills .
For instance
 , from my own experience , Unless I am in professional learning commitment with scheduled lessons , I can not focus on developing
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 skills. The
second
 reason is that as long as
students
 do not go to a campus ,they will have a lack of social interactions with people in the field they want to get into .
Furthermore
,universities regularly organise events where
students
 can interact with companies in the field which they aiming to get into ; and
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students
 to build their connection network. So, supposing I have PPC online learning , I would not be able to have a connection network in that sector as university
students
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 To sum up , I believe that in spite of the benefits that online learning provides it still abandons many major qualities that traditional learning associations normally provide their
students
 with . So , I strongly believe that what
students
 need to do is to stick to traditional learning .
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