Some people think computers and the internet are important in children's study, but others think student s can learn more effectively in school and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own openion,
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The increasing
technology
for education highly affects students
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some people think Add a comma
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is a new way of learning, using the
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apply
technology
can help children in many ways. In the following paragraph, both views will be outlined in detail.
To begin
with, in traditional
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the traditional
a traditional
school
, teachers always teach their students
in classes. This
condition has some benefit
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students
can ask or discuss with their teachers directly but also
they are more interactive when they are study
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for example
when teacher
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a teacher
the teacher
a
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students
will make a little conference in their group in the same room and share some idea with each other which is effective learning.
However
, some situations will affect learning
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the learning
for example
COVID-19 situation
making people all over the world keep social distancing to protect themselves. The situation
makes dramatically change
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changes
school
because they have to change to online-learning
. Using Correct your spelling
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online-learning
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online learning
situation
because students
can learn by using simulation. Some research showed that when students
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face-to-face
students
will be scared and shy, but if you use simulation
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by sending messages.
In conclusion, it can be seen that both views Correct your spelling
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technology
will be played an important role in every place including with
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school
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and using computer
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computers
internet
to practice some simulation. Correct article usage
the internet
However
, it depends on the situation
, teacher and student's ability to use the technology
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