Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers.

The increasing of using
technology
for education highly affects
students
' lives. Some experts believe that
students
can be addicted to computers and the internet if we allow them to use them often.
In contrast
, some people think
this
is a new way of learning, using
technology
can help children in many ways. In the following paragraph, both views will be outlined in detail.
To begin
with, in a traditional way at school, teachers always teach their
students
in classes.
This
condition has some benefits because not only
students
can ask or discuss with their teachers directly but
also
they are more interactive when they are studying with their friends
for example
when a teacher assigns group work,
students
will make a little conference in their group in the same room and share some idea with each other which is effective learning.
However
, some situations will affect the learning process
such
as the COVID-19
situation
making people all over the world keep social distancing themselves to protect themselves. The
situation
makes dramatically changed in schools because they have to change to online learning. Using online learning is a better way for the
situation
because
students
can learn by using simulations. Some research showed that when
students
have to do some face-to-face activities, some
students
will be scared and shy, but if you use simulations reduce their shyness of them.
Moreover
, using the internet can help
students
ask teacher question whenever they want by sending messages. In conclusion, it can be seen that both views are useful in real life and very effective. In the future
technology
will be played an important role in every place including school so I suggest learning paper-based at school and using computers and the internet to practise some simulations.
However
, it depends on the
situation
, teacher and student's ability to use the
technology
.
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