In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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authorities
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this
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issue.
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underdeveloped
food
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example
exmaple
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people
are dying everyday
just because of hunger even though they have a lot of Replace the word
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food
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a better
system
in some areas
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making
food
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On the solution side, various measures can be done by the local authorities
so that every citizen can sleep freely without worry
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food
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the transportation
system
has to be properly developed because enough food
supply can reduce hunger if they will not have superior
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a superior
system
. Secondly
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improving Correct article usage
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this
system
, authorities
should also
provide education to people
who live far from urban areas
and are still self-reliant like catching the fishes and hunting.
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lack
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the supply
food
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