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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#someone #luck
Main Content: 8.1 Arranging tours for guests 8.2 Introducing tourist attractions in Binh Dinh, Phu Yen, Nha Trang 8.3 Providing tourist information When referring to the tasks of tour guides
such
 as tour arrangements for guests, we can use a wide range of vocabulary, tenses and/ or Passive Voice. •The present simple can be used for a program or regular schedule which is rarely
to change
Change the verb form
changed
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. • The future simple can be used for offering, asking for a request, promising, ordering, expressing thoughts,
predictions
Correct word choice
and predictions
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. • The passive voice is used to emphasize the action (the verb) rather than
who
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whom
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/ what (the agent) did the action.
In other words
, when the subject is not relevant or we do want to mention it (whatever the reason).
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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