Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the most recent years, the world has shown an important increase in combustible prices.

However

, some people claim that rising fuel prices remain the most effective solution to decrease its high demand and massive exploitation. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

this

view and believe that

this

approach can be ineffective to solve

this

issue.

Firstly

this

way may not be sufficient to lead to a significant decrease in the consumption of

combustible

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combustibles

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In other words

, fuels is an important input for transport practices and individuals still use them despite

theirs

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their

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costs because,

for example

, people who are far away from their workplace or universities will undoubtedly use vehicles or public transportations to move for their work and study and

therefore

their consumption of fuels will be not extremely changed by

this

path.

Thus

this

way will be not effective enough to reduce the consumption of

this

power source.

Secondly

this

proposal may lead to several economic problems if it will be applied. To put it simply, small industries in which fuels remain an essential product for their work will find many

difficulties

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to support their high costs.

As a result

, the probability for these companies to have some financial problems and in some cases get bankrupt will be higher and

therefore

the economy of the nation that accepts

this

proposal will have

also

many problems.

That is

why

this

solution can engender many negative effects on the economy of small industries. In conclusion, despite that increasing combustible prices can discourage consumers from overuse, I believe that

this

approach is not effective enough to solve the problem of high demand for energy.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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11Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

274 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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