Some people think that criminals should be given longer term imprisonment, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Punishment

by the law must be a fair and efficient

system

for all gangland. Many people advocate that punishing

criminals

by putting them behind bars for a long time will reduce the

crime

rate. I completely disagree with the statement. In

this

essay, I will illustrate that having a

rehabilitation

program

and fairly punishing the

criminals

on

case

to

case

basis is important to reduce crimes. Many crimes are done by

criminals

even after their capital

punishment

.

This

may be due to their actual background. Family, and friends may be involved in the

crime

hence

after serving in the prison they come back and do similar activities like smuggling or drug abuse. In that

case

,

definitely

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the

crime

rate will not reduce.

However

, having a

rehabilitation

program

in prison can enlighten the adverse effects of atrocity and can be beneficial to reduce

the

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crime

. In Columbia, 65% of drug abusers and traders who served the

punishment

and underwent the

rehabilitation

program

have not repeated the

crime

and they are leading a healthy normal life.

Hence

a proper

rehabilitation

program

is necessary in the prison for each and every

case

. Fair

punishment

is

also

crucial based on the

crime

conducted. All

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organized

crime

cannot be treated in the same way, a thief cannot be given

a

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life imprisonment. A murder can be given the same. So it is very important to have a fair judiciary

system

where all the cases are scrutinised efficiently and the

punishment

is given. Jurisdiction should

also

make public announcements of the charges rendered on the

criminals

so that people realise the effects of committing a

crime

. With

this

strict, fair and efficient judiciary ,

system

the

crime

rate will reduce.

As per

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the above reasons

i

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have put forth that longer punishments will not change the mindset of the

criminals

instead

a proper

punishment

system

and correct

rehabilitation

system

can change

people

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mindset toward

crime

and

the

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society will be

crime

free.