Some people think that criminals should be given longer term imprisonment, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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by the law must be a fair and efficient

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for all gangland. Many people advocate that punishing

criminals

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by putting them behind bars for a long time will reduce the

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rate. I completely disagree with the statement. In

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essay, I will illustrate that having a

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program

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and fairly punishing the

criminals

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on

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to

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basis is important to reduce crimes. Many crimes are done by

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even after their capital

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.

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may be due to their actual background. Family, and friends may be involved in the

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after serving in the prison they come back and do similar activities like smuggling or drug abuse. In that

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,

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the

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rate will not reduce.

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, having a

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program

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in prison can enlighten the adverse effects of atrocity and can be beneficial to reduce

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crime

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. In Columbia, 65% of drug abusers and traders who served the

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and underwent the

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program

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have not repeated the

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and they are leading a healthy normal life.

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a proper

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program

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is necessary in the prison for each and every

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. Fair

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is

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crucial based on the

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conducted. All

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organized

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cannot be treated in the same way, a thief cannot be given

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life imprisonment. A murder can be given the same. So it is very important to have a fair judiciary

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where all the cases are scrutinised efficiently and the

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is given. Jurisdiction should

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make public announcements of the charges rendered on the

criminals

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so that people realise the effects of committing a

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. With

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strict, fair and efficient judiciary ,

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the

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rate will reduce.

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the above reasons

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have put forth that longer punishments will not change the mindset of the

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instead

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a proper

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system

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and correct

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system

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can change

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mindset toward

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and

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society will be

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free.