Your friend has been offered a place on a cource at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an letter to your friend Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university Recommend the best way to for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

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I am delighted to know that you have scored good marks and secured your seat in M.B.B.S. at my university. I would be happy to help you in finding accommodations proximate to the college. Well, in my due course I stayed in a shared fully furnished apartment with my two classmates.

However

, the rents are cheaper but the place is far away from the university. I would like to suggest you

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stay nearby the university as it will save

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time while travelling which will help you to relax and complete assignments. You can search for rent on Homeforrent.com or Housing.com where will get

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of choices with affordable prices.

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, I would alert you to please check houses before shifting as many of my classmates faces issues about the damaged property like

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as broken electric switches, water leakage and so on. Let me know if you

further

need any assistance. Best wishes, Juhi.

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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