Nowadays, as
the
society moves Correct article usage
apply
in
a relatively fast pace, there Change preposition
at
exist
an escalating tendency Correct subject-verb agreement
exists
of
Change preposition
for
couples
Use synonyms
delaying
their procreation. The following paragraph will discuss the key points of the tendency and later on analyze Change the verb form
to delay
the
potential effects of it.
Change the word
its
To begin
with, I personally think that economy plays a prominent role Linking Words
for
the reason for Change preposition
in
the
procrastination. As the living standard rises, the Correct article usage
apply
needs
to afford Fix the agreement mistake
need
for
a multitude of factors increases. Payments Change preposition
apply
such
as electricity, water bill and internet services, Linking Words
combine
with the needs for food and other miscellaneous things may be small in terms of affordability, but a lot of the expenses Change the form of the verb
combined
accumulates
could bring the Wrong verb form
accumulated
couples
into consideration. Use synonyms
This
results in less time to plan for family and escalation of working time and workload. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
couples
tend to spend time building their careers so as to reach Use synonyms
an
amount of wage that they desire or think Correct article usage
the
that
will be stable enough to sustain the family in the far future. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
way of approach is to minimalize the burden of finance, Linking Words
makes
their life easier and economically less stressful. Statistic has shown that 54% Correct word choice
and makes
Vietnamese
who was born in the 90s tends to care for a more sustainable career before planning to reproduce offspring. The main reason is to avoid the shortage of money to afford Change preposition
of Vietnamese
for
their children’s needs and to sustain the happiness of the family in the Change preposition
apply
long-term
.
Correct your spelling
long term
However
, the main drawback of Linking Words
this
approach is Linking Words
aging
. Research has shown that the possibility to reproduce is lowered as the age of women increases. Change the spelling
ageing
In other words
, it is difficult for women to have children when they are old. Linking Words
Firstly
, women who excessively delay their plans of having kids will suffer difficulties from fertilization. In some cases, Linking Words
unfortunate
Add an article
the unfortunate
an unfortunate
event
may happen Fix the agreement mistake
events
such
as miscarriage or even fatality Linking Words
to
the woman. Change preposition
of
Furthermore
, children may suffer from mental disabilities Linking Words
such
as Down syndrome and others. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
A
Vietnamese research pointed out that the probability of children suffering from depression triples if Correct article usage
apply
couples
give birth at the age of 34 and above.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
couples
tend to delay their Use synonyms
offspring
plan for the greater good of financial Change noun form
offspring's
sustain
and affordability. Replace the word
sustainability
This
might be the reason why they fail to have kids, as procreation at Linking Words
older
age may cause psychological and physical problems for the child.Add an article
an older
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