Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays many parents allow their own kids to be responsible
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simple
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thing
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However
, there are many more
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is
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against the idea as
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might lead to
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society of individuals. It will be discussed in
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To begin
with, the
children
who were allowed to make a decision
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they were young tend to be confident in themselves. It is generally acknowledged that
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confidence is a key skill for
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role, and it will prepare them to be a manager in the future.
Moreover
,
this
skill could be seen not only
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managers but
also
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presidents in all countries.
This
is very important to prepare them to make
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choices on simple things in their daily life.
On the other hand
, without parental guidance, they were considered
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spoiled
children
because they do as they wish but
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concerns that might cause a negative impact on people around them. These
children
always freely speak up their
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on
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social network
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many people were criticized
about
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their appearance.
For example
, the Korean superstar committed suicide as she was criticized
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her
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and appearance by the anonymous on the internet. After her death, the policeman investigated and found that 8 out of 10 criticizers are
children
below 18 years old. In conclusion, I agree that
children
can start choosing what food they want to eat or the clothes they want to wear. But without parental control, it might lead to
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outcome
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. So, the parent is very essential to consider what is proper
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their ages and monitor them closely to ensure that they fully understand their freedom and responsibility.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Consequence-awareness
  • Self-centered
  • Informal decision-making education
  • Child development
  • Age-appropriate choices
  • Cognitive growth
  • Fostering independence
  • Parental guidance
  • Societal norms
  • Interpersonal consideration
  • Balance of freedom
  • Individualism versus collectivism
  • Experience-based learning
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