Students should choose a University major that prepares them for high- paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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University degrees are stepping stones for a bright professional career for many
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. Nowadays
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select educational institutions for their professional degrees based on their lucrative job placements after their studies. I strongly agree with the statement and will give my explanation with valid reasons
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as companies go in search of good employees to reputed
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and these
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teach the skills to
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which are important to possess a bright future.
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, talent hiring is a top priority for any company. So in search of many big organisations go to the best of the best
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and hire the
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who graduated through campus placements.An institution by the name of IIT (Indian Institute of Technology)in India where engineers graduated in various fields
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as mechanical, electrical , computer science and etc. The selection into these
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is done through a competitive entrance exam. Where in India almost 3 million children appear for the exam and only 20% of them get placed into these
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based on their meriHowever, after graduating from these
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all the
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are 100% placed in big companies with a minimum wage of half a million dollars salary per annum.
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not to leave behind, the in-depth knowledge provided in
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. Many hiring bodies just go to big academies only to trust the skill set held by the individuals from
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educational institution. In India major funding for research and development in the field of renewable energy, pollution control or new developments in artificial intelligence is done by governments in
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majorly. Due to
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are well equipped.
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perhaps get the benefits by gaining top-notch learning and they can use
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skill's in their jobs.
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students
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choose big
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to gain competitive knowledge which is better used in their careers. So big educational institution provide their enlistment with both skills and placements after graduating. So I go with the conclusion that I strongly agree with the statement
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choose better academies for having high-paying jobs, which indeed can lead to having their own house, family and financially stable life.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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