Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days,
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problems was increased and had
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impact on the earth. The question is, what
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better method to solve
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? In
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of the advantages, some people believe that the better
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to solve
environment
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problems is higher the
cost
of
fuel
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cars
. The main reason
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to support
this
claim
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the
cars
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smoke
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in
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the
environment
and the main reason for air
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pollution
and temperature higher. To illustrate, in Spain
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nation's
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don't
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used
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the
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cars
for
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transportation
transpotation
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transportation
. Meanwhile, 60% approximately used the subway or cycling for
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transport.
This
method helped to tackle environmental
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issues
issue
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issues
.
However
,
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increase
the
cost
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fuel
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cars
not
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good
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a good
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way to save the
environment
.
Firstly
, replace the normal
cars
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electeric
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electric
cars
.
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, electric
cars
can
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save
serve
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save
the cities
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cars
smoking and the
hurm
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harm
recycling for
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car
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materels
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materials
.
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walk and
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use
usd
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use
the subway.
This
is because
,
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the way a faster and helped to
discrease
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decrease
increase
the traffic jam in the city road.
Also
, the
last
shown
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50
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%
from
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the people tend
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to the job or
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the
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public transportation. In conclusion,
although
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complication
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higher the
cost
of
fuel
for
cars
and other
uehicles
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vehicles
the best
mathod
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method
to solve
this
issue, I believe that
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increase
increasing
increas
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increasing
the
cost
of
fuel
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the
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a
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faster way to save the
environment
and
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decreased
discreased
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decrease
the
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pullotion
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pollution
in general.
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  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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