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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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Quite many people nowadays tend to say that the best
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 to live is now, compared to other periods of history. To my mind,
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 a point is totally relevant considering the fact that there is no physical way to travel back in
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 and we do not have an opportunity to choose the
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 when we would like to live in. Apart from that, there are some additional arguments that can prove
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 point as well.
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,
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 expectancy has dramatically increased by 20 years on average during the
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 70 years due to the extensive development of the medical industry.
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, thanks to globalization and technological progress, individuals have a wider range of career and
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 opportunities than our ancestors.
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, there are some periods in history when it might be interesting to live in.
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, the age of exploration when humanity actively searched our planet for new lands. Despite the lower quality of
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, it was a
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 when lots of people and countries were driven by the will of discovery. Still, it was not just a period when new regions appeared on the map, but
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 of great opportunities when brave individuals who are not afraid of challenges could change the world,
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 is something that makes it similar to nowadays. Now is considered to be the best
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 to live by many people. Despite the fact that there is no
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 machine that lets us make any kind of comparison ourselves, certain historic statistics like the average duration of
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 can confirm
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 statement in general. Yet, other ages of history had their specific aspects that might be interesting to be experienced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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