Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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technology

techonology

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behaviour has

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that change the life of living and

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will share my own personal

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devices which is helpful in our daily

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and fulfil our requirement. That makes our work easy and super fast.

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brings our life easier.

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positive development.

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our society and most

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can't afford it due to poor condition.

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negative impact on our community because in

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and they don't want to continue

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human beings

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human beings

. In conclusion, There is both positive and negative affect on

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of technology. In my

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we should balance

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both sides and

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maintain

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maintain

both technology and relationship.

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romantic relationships
family dynamics
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