Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days
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technology
techonology
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technology
this
time, people
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people's
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changed
change
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changed
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the upcoming
every
new Correct determiner usage
apply
machines
that change the life of living and Change to a singular noun
machine
this
is going to affect people
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people's
connection
. we will discuss new technologies and Fix the agreement mistake
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experience
experiences
experince
.
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experience
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, Scientists and experts are bringing new technologies all over the Correct your spelling
world
word
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world
for example
machines
, computers, electronic
devices which is helpful in our daily Correct word choice
and electronic
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lives
life
life's
lifes
and fulfil our requirement. That makes our work easy and super fast. Correct your spelling
lives
For example
, in recent years people
did all work by themselves like farmers has
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have
not
machine to cut grass and they cut by used hands but nowadays they have Correct your spelling
no
machines
to cut the grass and different equipments
to use in their field. New Correct your spelling
equipment
automachines
brings our life easier. Correct your spelling
auto machines
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is the
positive development.
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On the other hand
, New things affects
our connections, because some Change the verb form
affect
people
afford new developments that coming in
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of
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the
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people
can't afford it due to poor condition. This
thing spoil
our links to Change the verb form
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eacth
other. Correct your spelling
each
This
is the
negative impact on our community because in Correct article usage
a
this
technology world persons
dependent Replace the word
people
all
their work on Change preposition
on all
machines
and they don't want to continue Add an article
the relationship
relationship
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relationships
to
other Change preposition
with
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human beings
humanbeings
.
In conclusion, There is both positive and negative affect on Correct your spelling
human beings
people
of technology. In my opinion
we should balance Add a comma
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maintain
mantain
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maintain
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