While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise for the accident, - tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl.

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Dear Mark, Greetings of the day! I hope
this
letter finds you well and in good health. The reason for writing
this
letter is to let you know that while you were on vacation when I stayed in your apartment, I accidentally dropped the pot which you had kept on the table
next
to the television. I had kept my car keys and because I had to attend to an urgent appointment I hastily took the car keys from the
bowl
. Unexpectedly and to my disbelief the
bowl
slipped from my hand and shattered to pieces. I humbly apologize for being flippant and I realize
this
bowl
was expensive. After the
bowl
was broken, I cleaned the living area and collected the glass pieces and disposed of them safely. To make up for my careless misdemeanour, I wish to replace the above-mentioned
bowl
while going shopping
next
time. Please accept my apologies and I will gift porcelain chinaware as a gift, the
next
time when I would visit you. I hope you would realise my mistake and forgive me for having broken your expensive
bowl
. Yours sincerely, John
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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