Bullying behaviour has become a major problem at schools. What are the causes and solutions to this problem?

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The practice of bullying has been seen in every other place. It has become the most trending

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essay will discuss the primary causes of

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are a disturbed family system and no punishments at learning institutes. While

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the most viable solutions to

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are, strict punishments for students and awareness of the effects of bullying by the government. The primary cause of bullying is the distributed family system.

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means that the families that are affected by the missing role of any one parent, lack giving attention and time for their children. As a consequence, they bully others at school, knowing that the surroundings will get entertained and they will receive the attention they have been missing. A recent study showed 65% of bulliers, had disturbed family issues.

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, no punishment taken by the teachers is increasing

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problem. Many students bully their colleagues because they know nothing would happen to them. A recent survey showed that 70% of young children are unaware that it is a wrong practice

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since they have not faced any consequences of doing it.

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shows that these causes need to be addressed.

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, the most appropriate solution to

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would be the establishment of a 'No Bullying' policy.

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should start the campaign named, zero tolerance policy of bullying and strong punishment should be provided, as

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will create a fear of facing the consequence.

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, a school suspended a student for a month, for bullying their colleague.

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one example developed a fear in everyone and reduced the amount of

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by 15%.

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, the government should start a public campaign on media platforms and in

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regarding the dangerous effects of bullying on the victim.

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would provide awareness to the audience and students about its effects on mental health.Recently the UK established an article on bullying which resulted in sharing of different victim stories on social media platforms. These examples show that solutions to

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the

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of bullying in

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is severely caused by a disturbed family system and a lack of punishments in the

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can be solved by providing awareness about its consequences and imposing a zero-tolerance policy in

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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Bullying behaviour has become a major problem at schools. What are the causes and solutions to this problem?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

Adult youths are often called up for working development of communities. Some people say that they should be paid other say that they should not be pair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Air travel is cheap these days, allowing ordinary people to travel further. Some people say that air fare should be increased because this leads to environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.