You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there “describe what you saw offer to take your friend there

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Dear Michael, How are you doing? Hope you and your family are doing well. It's been a long time since our

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meeting. Let's plan for a get-together in a fortnight if you are available. I am very excited to share my recent travel experience to Colorado, United States. I reached the destination by a drive and the climate was so pleasant and the views were mesmerising. Since it was the fall season we were stunned by the beauty of fall colours.

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, I ended up taking the performance sport skiing, which was a complete package of fun,

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, I was really scared while performing

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sport. I am planning to travel again to Colorado in near future.

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time I would be trying water surfing,

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to Skiing. I would like to invite you to

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trip if you are available. I look forward to seeing you. Best regards, Vivek V

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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