“You want to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell him/her about your business explain why you think it is a good idea and ask him/her for some help or advice”

Dear Tyson, Hope you are doing great! It's been a

while

since our

last

meeting and I am really motivated to see your success in business. I am very excited to let you know that I am planning to launch a new start-up. As you are aware, I am passionate about software applications. Considering that, I am working on launching a new online store

that is

exclusively designed for toys and computer

games

. I am planning to make a policy that provides maximum benefits to customers. All the available products will be certified to ensure children's safety.

In addition

to that,

games

will

available

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for rent and buy. For

games

, we will provide the online code with which they can download the

games

and activate them to play. I feel that

this

online portal will be successful considering the wide range of

games

and

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quality products and ease of

its

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apply

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use. I would need your valuable advice in setting up the server and ideas on how to minimize the cost. I know you had certain issues with the server

set-up

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during your initial days.

Additionally

, I request you to share the invoice for the assistance you will be providing and I hope you will accept it Looking forward to your reply. Best regards, Vivek V